Improving text

LI- To revise and edit a recount.

Improving a recount is making the recount a more interesting. The more interesting the recount is the more people that would like to read it and buy it.We had to improve a partners writing by making additions and points. Once we had finished the adding we had to count up the points that the person adding on your writing and if they got the highest number then you would win and the others had to writing two other recounts.