L.I to imagine what it would be like to step on the moon. For task 5 we had to get into creative mode. We had to write a poem that is about how we feel if we had stepped on the moon. We could do any type of poem. We had to write how we felt if we were stepping on to the moon. For me it would be scary at first but maybe it is not too bad.
Hi Andrew, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created - would you like to walk on the moon? I'm not sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew,
ReplyDeleteI have been reading your blog post and I think it sounds amazing! Have you been enjoying doing these summer learning journey task?
If so, Keep up the good job!
Hello Andrew! This is a great start to the Summer Learning Journey programme this year. I really enjoyed reading your Haiku, stepping on the moon would definitely be a special day. How would you feel to actually walk on the moon? Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great. Remember to re read your text as it might not make sense. What was the hardest part of this activity?
Blog you later!
~ Florence