Let me tell you about assemblies at PBS. First we walk to the hall quietly then wait at the door quietly for our teacher to tell us to line up silently on the floor. We sit sensibly on the floor and the year 7 and 8 sit on the chairs at the back of the hall. After all the class's have sat sensibly on the floor the people on the stage will ring the bell for when our princely comes to the hall.
LI: To think about how I can word/phrase my ideas so they are clear.
My story end because we did not get much time. I learnt that assemblies are important because you get special stuff. I also learnt that in story's there should be capital letters and full stops.
I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1 and my teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilive.
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Thursday, 27 July 2017
Capital letters and full stops
LI: To use capital letters in our writing.
LI: To use full stops in our writing.
I learnt that capital letters are used the first letter in a name, in celebrations, in days, in months, and in places.I learnt that full stops are used at the end a sentence. I did this by using google doc and using help. I did sentences that did not make sense and edited it by putting full stops to where it go's and capital letters.
Capital letters
- Last year we went to France for our holidays. It was very warm.
- Have you seen born free? It’s a film about lions in Africa.
- After speaking to Jim, I went home. It was a long day.
- Easter is sometimes in March, but this year it is in April.
- What day is it today? It’s Sunday.
Full stop
- Fred has a dog the dog is called Ned. Ned is brown with white patches and a white face. Fred likes to play with Ned. Ned is naughty if Fred throws the ball Ned will catch it in her mouth. Ned runs away with the ball she will not bring it back. Ned will walk on her lead if Ned is not on her lead she will run away. Ned likes to chase cats and rabbits she digs in daddy’s garden mummy takes Ned for a walk to school to collect Fred. Fred loves to see Ned after school. Ned loves to see Fred too.
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Friday, 7 July 2017
The tortoise and the 2 kids.
LI: To plan and write narratives quickly.
I learnt that if you want to write a story you need to have compound, complex, and simple sentences. I learnt that stories are fake it's made up, if you want to write a story just think of something random and make it make sense. I did this by using google docs and using a little help from my groups plan.
I learnt that if you want to write a story you need to have compound, complex, and simple sentences. I learnt that stories are fake it's made up, if you want to write a story just think of something random and make it make sense. I did this by using google docs and using a little help from my groups plan.
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