Assemblies

Let me tell you about assemblies at PBS. First we walk to the hall quietly then wait at the door quietly for our teacher to tell us to line up silently on the floor. We sit sensibly on the floor and the year 7 and 8 sit on the chairs at the back of the hall. After all the class's have sat sensibly on the floor the people on the stage will ring the bell for when our princely comes to the hall.

LI: To think about how I can word/phrase my ideas so they are clear.
My story end because we did not get much time. I learnt that assemblies are important because you get special stuff. I also learnt that in story's there should be capital letters and full stops.