Edited Work

Recount planner (TREE)

Title	The Hunt
Reveal (orientation)	Three groups Three partners Te rangimarie Sila Andrew/me Go to teacher Get paper
Events	Got paper with clue on it Go look at clue Clue - 15-10 Answer 5 Go room 5 First Clue - Mr Wong Clue on the room 5 clue Where does mr Ogilvie keep his equipment? Answer - hall Go hall Find clue on hall door Answer on clue on door Is thinks Other clue on door hall clue 10 Go to room 10 Find answer on door Answer - star The phrase is - Mr Wong thinks star
Ending	Write down clues Find out phrase Come back to class Go to teacher Let teacher see phrase Then stretched Then started work

Today we had to get into groups of three and get into three groups. I got in a group of three and walked up to Mr. Wong and got a paper with a clue on it, it said 15-10 the answer was 5 so we went to room 5.

Then we got there and there was a letter the other clue was on it, the clue was where does Mr. Ogive put his equipment? I shouted, “The hall is where Mr. Ogilvie puts his equipment!! We got the answer on the room 5 door and the answer was Mr. Wong.

We ran to the hall but it was locked then there was a letter on the door. The clue on the letter was 10, but the answer we were looking for thought the answer though. When we saw 10 I thought of room 10.

Then we ran to room 10 and spotted a letter that had a star on the letter so we drew a star but it did not look right so I wrote star. Then on our paper, it said Mr. Wong thinks star.

Then when the other team came they had the other phrase which was wars is awesome. We ran to Mr. Wong and this is what he showed us. Both of the phrases together was Mr. Wong thinks star wars is awesome.

LI: To write a recount of an activity.

LI: To edit a recount of an activity.

I learnt that a recount is about what you have done in the past. For example I went outside for a run. I also learnt that recounts should have punctuation. How I learnt this was by doing the task and by listening