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A mysterious man stood next to an upside down car. He put his hand out to hitchhike. A car came along and it stopped. The driver asked the mysterious man if he’s alright. The man did not say anything. The driver told the mysterious man there is a station up the road. The driver sounded like he was scared. The mysterious man sat in the car.
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The driver kept looked at the man nervously. The mysterious man looked at his watch. Then the driver asked the mysterious man if he was ok again and still the man said nothing and he looked into the driver's eyes. The driver looked into the mysterious man’s goggles and saw that the car was driving off the a cliff.
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Then the next minute he really drove off a cliff and crashed. The mysterious man survived the car crash and the driver didn’t. Another car drove around the corner and the mysterious man tried to hitchhike again.
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